@ Ali...asal main udaas shaairi apne ander bohat attraction rakhti hay,in my view, jo lafz takleef ya dukh main nikaltay hain ziada pur aser hotay hain or may b a pesimist person like me har sad situation ko apni life main kahin na kahin fit karne ki koshish karta hay...:)...may be thats y mera ziada tar intakhaab udaas hi hota hay....but i like purumeed shaairi as well..and for my new reader i sure will share some happy and hopefull poetry on my blog...:) ... by the way thanx for visiting...keep coming :)
I swear to God... main 100% ye nazam aik shakhs pe apply kar sakti hoon. Bohot bohot umdah! Didn't know someone else would feel it like this though and convert the betrayal into poetry.
Apni beeti jag beeti hai jab se dil ne jaan liya Hanstay hanstay jeevan beeta rona dhona chor diya
yehi to shaairi ka maza hay sochtay hum hain or us soch ko alfaz ye shaair detay hain :). glad u like it......or shair bohat zabardast hay that u shared..loved it
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shayari ka intikhaab acha hai ... laikin kia aap sirf udaas shayari hi parhti hain ? :)
umeed aur khushion wali shayari bhi bohat achi hoti hai :)
wahh ...... :)
@ Ali...asal main udaas shaairi apne ander bohat attraction rakhti hay,in my view, jo lafz takleef ya dukh main nikaltay hain ziada pur aser hotay hain or may b a pesimist person like me har sad situation ko apni life main kahin na kahin fit karne ki koshish karta hay...:)...may be thats y mera ziada tar intakhaab udaas hi hota hay....but i like purumeed shaairi as well..and for my new reader i sure will share some happy and hopefull poetry on my blog...:) ... by the way thanx for visiting...keep coming :)
@silent....nawazish :)
I swear to God... main 100% ye nazam aik shakhs pe apply kar sakti hoon. Bohot bohot umdah! Didn't know someone else would feel it like this though and convert the betrayal into poetry.
Apni beeti jag beeti hai jab se dil ne jaan liya
Hanstay hanstay jeevan beeta rona dhona chor diya
yehi to shaairi ka maza hay sochtay hum hain or us soch ko alfaz ye shaair detay hain :). glad u like it......or shair bohat zabardast hay that u shared..loved it
Kamaaaal!!!
shukria..:)
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