Tohmatain to lagti hain
roshni ki khwahish main
ghar say bahir anay ki
kuch saza to hoti hay
log log hotay hain
unko kiya khabar janan..!
zakhm kese hotay hain
kitnay gehray hotay hain
kab ye soch saktay hain
aisi begunah aankhain
ghar k konay khudron main
chup k kitna roti hain
tohmatain to lagti hain
roshni ki khwahish main
tohmaton k lagnay say
dil say dost ko janan
abb udaas kiya karna
tohmaton say kiya darna...!!!
6 comments:
I saw your blog after you left comment on my blog (zindagi-ki-diary). Iread your poetry. You have immense talent of expression of emotions. I advise you to write in urdu transcript , get a teacher on urdu poetry. You can go very high if you decide to keep it. Your poem 'wazahatain' is a gem!
:)thank u sooo very much for stoping by and liking my stuff...i will try to use urdu transcript....and at the end honestly speaking non of these poems r my own :) i never tried to write.i think i dont have this ability at all...but this i can say it for sure that i am JANOONI about good poetry :)...i have loads of such collections...i love to read and feel poetry...and after crating a blog i also like to share it with the ppl having good taste in poetry :)..but u wish me luck...may be one day u see my stuff on this blog :) u never know wat is ahead..!!!:)...thanx again for ur apriciation.
Good poem , i had a suggestion .. Y don't u give meaning of difficult words at the end of the or in between the poem ..(like the blog AWAZ-e-Dil-e Ambreen) .. that'd be great for the readers who are weak in urdu , like me!
Good poem , i had a suggestion .. Y don't u give meaning of difficult words at the end of the or in between the poem ..(like the blog AWAZ-e-Dil-e Ambreen) .. that'd be great for the readers who are weak in urdu , like me!
When Somebody Says....
U've changed..!
Its Only Cuz..
U've Stopped Living Ur Life Their Way....!!!
SO TURE!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you abid for liking it and for ur suggestion...i will try to work upon it but no promise :)...actually its quite time consuming task and i usually got very short time to post my enteries....but when ever possible will do it for readers like you :)
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